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The 7th graders have worked up stories responding to prompts about a giant kitten who takes over a city OR being lost in a snowy wilderness... Check out their stories below!
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Ada Gonzalez
1/28/2016 12:22:04 pm
I was heading to Alaska, in winter time, until something horrible happened. I asked the flight attendance what was going on, she said “It’s just turbulence, stay in your seat and nothing happens.” So I did as the flight attendance said. Few minutes later I heard the pilot saying that we were having some problems, I panicked and decided to go to the bathroom. While I was in the bathroom I felt a big and powerful crash. I got out of the bathroom and I saw that everyone was covered with snow and dead. The only one who survived was me.
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José Ernesto
1/31/2016 12:39:09 pm
Amazing story Ada! I loved your vocabulary skills and your high-ranked words.
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Karla Paredes
1/28/2016 12:33:40 pm
Something I Hardly
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7A for Awesome Class
1/29/2016 05:31:35 am
Karla, great writing! We really liked the twist at the end and the vocabulary words. We also liked your metaphors and descriptions! Great job! -7A
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Maria Paula
1/30/2016 11:59:47 am
Love it. It was really cool, i could picture myself in that situation. And the end was really funny.
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Hermes
1/31/2016 05:30:29 am
Really good story, adjectives and details make it AMAZING
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Daniela
1/31/2016 09:04:59 am
Your story was very good! I really liked the end when you said that you don't know the slightest thing about him.
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José Ernesto
1/31/2016 12:42:34 pm
Hi Karla! Very good story. Loved your story in all senses. You got really inspired! Congratulations!
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Guille Alba
1/28/2016 12:34:43 pm
Standing Tall
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7 A for Awesome Class
1/29/2016 05:22:25 am
Guille, that was a great story! I loved the twist, that the cat is saving, instead of destroying, the city. I also really liked the sarcasm! Great work. -The 7A Class
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Daniel El-Hage
1/29/2016 07:07:59 am
It was one of the best I read, I really liked the part of the chemicals the little kitty drank...
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Ada Gonzalez
1/30/2016 01:21:23 pm
This was one of the stories that made me laugh, I liked the sarcasm specially the part of the elevator.
Brayan
1/31/2016 05:31:06 am
porque el gato c droga?
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Carola Prida
1/31/2016 04:08:19 pm
Guillee loved the story! I was very engaged to every single part, and specially the part of the elevator!! (the sarcasm part)
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Daniela Lama
1/28/2016 12:57:02 pm
Lost in the Wild
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Maria Paula
1/30/2016 12:01:12 pm
I loved the end. I thought the family was going to forget about her, but they were right behind her. Loved it.
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Guille
1/31/2016 03:15:09 pm
I really liked your story. I loved the unexpected twist at the end and you included great vocabulary words.
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José E. Cross
1/28/2016 12:57:52 pm
Catzilla
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Daniel El-Hage
1/29/2016 07:05:13 am
I really liked your story, because it was were I most laughed.
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Maia Paula
1/28/2016 01:11:32 pm
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Ada Gonzalez
1/30/2016 01:16:55 pm
Loved the twist you made at the end.
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Daniela
1/31/2016 09:00:29 am
I really liked the end were it says that it was all a dream. It was very good and you described everything very well.
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Eduardo Quezada
1/28/2016 02:11:27 pm
I was In the remote area of Chernobyl just standing there seeing all the destroyed houses,factories.So cold,so cold I can feel the tension of the explosion that happened years ago I can hear the beast back in the wood the radioactive beast looking for some meat to survive. I started to look around and realize all storys i’ve heard are true the cold,the loneliness, the tension coming back from the woods that radioactive waste in the air all true. I walk around and saw skeletons of people and animals that died years ago either from the explosion or the radioactive air, the decomposed trees and plants. I feel the spirits coming to me building up inside me. Then the houses Oh those beautiful houses with no place to live in, no hope, no nothing. I started to feel nauseous , and had no air to breath no hope to live anymore the coldness just weaken me down those spirits pulling down to save them. I just felt my time was over
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Sofia Gamundi
1/28/2016 02:43:49 pm
Survive or Die
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Ana Lopez
1/30/2016 10:36:34 am
Sofia your story was really good, I loved it! But you have to check your spelling, and your use of subject-verb agreement.
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Andrea Alvarez
1/28/2016 03:50:01 pm
The airplane crashed into the mountains. Every piece of me was frozen to the seat. Nobody knew what happened, but no one was there. There was so much snow on my feet, I was a living popsicle. I took a red lantern that was lit and took a look around and found a fleece jacket. With all my courage together I was able to walk away from the airplane and into the woods. As I was walking up the mountain and making crosses with a pocket knife that I found stuck on a dead tree.
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Enrique
2/1/2016 12:16:55 pm
Loved the descriptive writing
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Hermes
1/28/2016 04:19:49 pm
Sunny
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Karla Paredes
1/29/2016 01:45:23 pm
It is funny and interesting at the same time.
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Ms. Nina
2/2/2016 06:18:21 am
Hermes, creative story! I love the idea, but it could be even better if you developed this story further with more details. Good start!
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Daniel El-Hage
1/28/2016 04:44:15 pm
SURVIVAL
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Karla Paredes
1/29/2016 01:44:09 pm
I liked your story because there was something always happening. Something always going on. It was never boring.
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Hermes
1/31/2016 05:33:56 am
Really liked it, especially for the fight with the wolf and the tree trunk.
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Enrique
2/1/2016 12:16:16 pm
I liked the wolf part
Enrique Hernandez
1/28/2016 05:27:04 pm
Mortal Freeze
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Enrique Hernandez
1/28/2016 05:27:57 pm
I'm not finished
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Sebastian Pascal
1/28/2016 05:28:21 pm
"Catzilla"
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Carola
1/28/2016 06:41:11 pm
Maybe I Have a Chance
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Ana Lopez
1/30/2016 10:43:53 am
I liked the story and the ending, since it was a cliff-hanger. Check you subject-verb agreement and your perfect!! I was a little bit too violent with the cannibalism and all, but it was really good.
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Guille
1/31/2016 03:19:09 pm
Very good story! I really liked it and you should make a second part to tell us more about what happened after the arm started shaking. The part of the bodies made me have goosebumps ew.
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Sebastian Martino
1/29/2016 02:01:43 pm
"CATZILLA"
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rodrigo
1/29/2016 04:33:04 pm
The Bad Comedy
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