Also please read each other's stories! There were some particularly good and creative stories for this assignment. :)
Please post your Magic Chest Stories -- with corrections! -- here.
Also please read each other's stories! There were some particularly good and creative stories for this assignment. :)
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Pinky
9/17/2014 09:50:03 pm
Magical Chest
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Anthony
9/18/2014 03:47:52 pm
ANTHONY in the chest
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Han No Ko
9/19/2014 01:44:52 am
In the mean time, Anthony's younger brother called John was sleeping. His grandpa told him about a dream that Anthony was in trouble. His grandpa told him to save his brother Anthony, and get the goldmine which was hidden by his grandpa. In the dream, his grandpa reminded John, "Go and save your brother Anthony, and get the goldmine. But do not think that you can get it easily, because monsters are looking after that goldmine. So, you have to fight them, John." Suddenly, John woke up. He remembered everything that his grandpa told him, so he went to the room that stored the chest. John opened the chest. Then, a very bright light appeared, and it took John into the chest. John arrived into a jungle. He didn't understand how he got there. But he remembered what his grandpa told him. He knew that he had to save his brother Anthony, and get the goldmine from the monsters. He knew that it wouldn't be easy but he didn't give up. He walked through the jungle. He saw a dragon in a huge cage. When the dragon saw John, the dragon expressed with his face to save him. For john, the cage was too big. He could even go inside between the grilles! But there was a big monster that was guarding. John went into the cage and unlocked the key while the monster was sleeping. After the cage was opened, the dragon killed the monster. The dragon thanked John and the dragon understood the language of humans but couldn't speak. The dragon got a name tag and he showed that to John. John knew the name of the dragon was Ethan. John explained all of the things about how he arrived here and for what. For saving Ethan's life, Ethan promised John that he would definitely help him. They continued to walk in the jungle. Ethan couldn't fly because he had an injury in his right wing. A group of monsters saw John and Ethan. Then, the monsters went and fought both of them. Ethan lost because the monsters were stronger and bigger than Ethan. The monsters took both of them to the palace where the King of Monsters had a goldmine. John and Ethan were arrested in that palace. Fortunately, the monsters had also arrested Anthony. He was held in the cage next to the cage which John was held in. The monsters thought Ethan was dead so they left him out of the palace. John's grandpa was already dead. But he was still a soul. He went and cured Ethan. After that, Ethan was alive again. Now, he was so strong and he also could fly. John's grandpa told Ethan to save John and Anthony. Ethan went to the palace and quietly killed the monsters that were guarding John and Anthony. Unfortunately, the King of Monsters knew about that and he came to kill John, Anthony and Ethan with his army. He had a big army. John told Ethan to fight them and he went and found the goldmine. Suddenly, his grandpa appeared, gave them a map to go the place that had the goldmine and two swords to fight and protect themselves. Finally, they found the goldmine. John touched the gold metal from the top of the goldmine and they got back to their home. Not only did John and Anthony get back but also the goldmine got back. At last, John and Anthony got a lot of gold and they lived happily until they died. But they didn't understand why their grandpa gave it to them.
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Ms. Nina
9/20/2014 03:13:50 pm
Good corrections, Han No Koh! Your dialogue punctuation looks much better. :)
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Sharon 9.2
9/19/2014 08:26:54 pm
The Mysterious Chest
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Sharon 9.2
9/19/2014 08:29:01 pm
Continued
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Ms. Nina
9/20/2014 03:13:15 pm
Excellent, Sharon! Good job continuing your story, even though it took two posts. :)
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Phyo Thet Khine
9/20/2014 01:12:43 am
Anthony in the chest
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Calvin 9.2
9/20/2014 10:16:47 pm
At first, he thought he had been paralyzed because he could not move. But he somehow knew that it was something more than paralysis, when he took a glance around, he was trapped in vines. The greenish vines twisted and wrapped around his hand mercilessly. His hands were trapped so tightly that he felt as if the veins on his body would stop working.
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calvin 9.2(repost-story cut off due to connection lost)
9/20/2014 10:33:43 pm
At first, he thought he had been paralyzed because he could not move. But he somehow knew that it was something more than paralysis, when he took a glance around, he was trapped in vines. The greenish vines twisted and wrapped around his hand mercilessly. His hands were trapped so tightly that he felt as if the veins on his body would stop working.
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Calvin 9.2
9/20/2014 10:36:45 pm
At first, he thought he had been paralyzed because he could not move. But he somehow knew that it was something more than paralysis, when he took a glance around, he was trapped in vines. The greenish vines twisted and wrapped around his hand mercilessly. His hands were trapped so tightly that he felt as if the veins on his body would stop working.
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Simon
9/20/2014 10:47:37 pm
Anthony felt that something was pulling his head and body to the mysterious chest. The sound he heard were like many voices coming together and became louder and louder. Anthony’s sight became darker and suddenly he lost his mind and fell down. About ten minutes later, he woke up. Anthony looked around him. He was standing on a long and big road. The sky was grey and there was no-one and nothing around. About thirty minutes later, he found one big building, which was blocking the big road. But there were some people in front of the building and they were walking around. When Anthony looked at the people’s faces carefully, they were very dirty and un-normal. They were biting their teeth and shaking their heads and twisting their steps. At first, Anthony thought that they were drunk at the party and walking or escape at the hospital. When he came to the people a bit closer, he noticed that they were Zombies. The Zombies saw Anthony and stared to rush to Anthony. Anthony was scared and he started to search for something to fight back. He saw a rifle on the ground, so he quickly picked it up and shot at the Zombies. Then Anthony went inside the building. There were lots of the Zombies. Anthony had to go through building to get out of the strange world, but there were too many Zombies to kill with the rifle. Suddenly, he remembered the Zombie movie called “Walking Dead.” In that movie, people who were survived, they put the Zombie’s blood to the body so as not to be smelt by the Zombies that they are foods. So he put some blood on his body and tried to go through the building of Zombies. He crawled on the floor slowly and carefully not to be noisy. When Anthony almost reached the exit door, he stood up to open the door but the door was made with the wood so the Zombies heard the sound. Anthony’s heart squeezed tightly. Zombies rushed to Anthony and tired to eat him and he lost his mind. When Anthony opened his eyes, he was on his bed and he had a nightmare while he was sleeping.
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Kit Kit
9/20/2014 11:36:49 pm
The chest was emoty, except for some dead insects. At first Antony was disappointed. He was about to close the lid when something stopped him from inside the chest, a whispering sounf came. It was like many voices talking together, saying words that I couldn't understand. Anthony felt hypotnized. Suddendly a blackness opened up before him. Gripping the sides of the box, he went starring. Then something sucked him up into the box, there are so many voices near him.
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Su Wadi
9/21/2014 02:15:41 am
I was just Anthony, Anthony Johnson who was always behind people, who did what others said and pleased others. I have never in my life thought about myself. I only thought about others’ happiness. Sometimes, I thought maybe I should change, or maybe I should stop being like a loser and stand up to others. Whenever I thought about that, I never did it. But something was different that day. It was special.
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Su Thinzar
9/21/2014 02:39:09 am
He saw nothing but the darkness. His eyelids got heavier as if an anchor was pulling them down. He wanted to see what was happening but his eyelids gave up and he fell into his own darkness. Moments later, Anthony’s eyes flattered open. He saw a faint light from the lamps. The lamps were going ‘Zap-Click-Click-Zap’ as they were told to make a rhythm. He could see the blurry pictures that were hanging on the wall like if touched, they would crumble into pieces.
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Kyaw Zin Hein
9/23/2014 02:06:37 am
He threw himself into the chest of darkness. He woke up painfully. His mind went blank. He didn’t know where he was now. He stood up and walked straight. He went to find where he was now. He walked and walked but there was no sign of people or animal. He just saw strange trees and rocks. They were big and strong rocks were formed across the road. Trees were very long and big brunches were coming out from the trees. He then found a pit, a dark and big. But there was a small light coming from the pit. He heard the talking sounds coming from the pit. Then he fell into the pit. He felt liked someone behind him pushed he down.
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Simon (fixed)
9/24/2014 11:29:22 pm
Anthony felt that something was pulling his head and body to the mysterious chest. The sound he heard were like many voices coming together and became louder and louder. Anthony’s sight became darker and suddenly he lost his mind and fell down. About ten minutes later, he woke up. Anthony looked around him. He was standing on a long and big road. The sky was grey and there was no-one and nothing around. About thirty minutes later, he found one big building, which was blocking the big road. But there were some people in front of the building and they were walking around. When Anthony looked at the people’s faces carefully, they were very dirty and not-normal. They were biting their teeth and shaking their heads and twisting their steps. At first, Anthony thought that they were drunk at a party and walking or escaped from the hospital. When he came to the people a bit closer, he noticed that they were zombies. The zombies saw Anthony and stared to rush to Anthony. Anthony was scared and he started to search for something to fight back with. He saw a rifle on the ground, so he quickly picked it up and shot at the Zombies. Then Anthony went inside the building. There were lots of the zombies. Anthony had to go through the building to get out of the strange world, but there were too many zombies to kill with the rifle. Suddenly, he remembered the zombie movie called “Walking Dead.” In that movie, people who survived put the zombie’s blood on to the body so as not to be smelt by the zombies that they are food. So he put some blood on his body and tried to go through the building of zombies. He crawled on the floor slowly and carefully so as not to be noisy. When Anthony almost reached the exit door, he stood up to open the door but the door was of the wood so the zombies heard the sound. Anthony’s heart squeezed tightly. Zombies rushed to Anthony and tired to eat him and he lost his mind. When Anthony opened his eyes, he was on his bed and he had a nightmare while he was sleeping.
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