Rewrite your stories with my edits, and post them here. Be sure to read other stories, as there was some excellent writing for this assignment!
The assignment was to write a story about a memorable event from your childhood as if you were still a child (just like Bruno in "The Boy in the Striped Pyjamas"). The purpose is for you to understand the link between perspective and tone in literature, as well as to practice your awesome writing skills.
Rewrite your stories with my edits, and post them here. Be sure to read other stories, as there was some excellent writing for this assignment!
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phone hein kyaw
12/2/2014 08:49:56 pm
I really hated and liked the house I stayed in. I always run around the garden and always get lost. But in raining season, I wasn’t allowed to play outside anymore, so I usually watched TV in the living room. I was very clumsy and bad at that time. My house had a lot of stairs. One day, I was watching “Tom and Jerry” in the living room, and I saw a spider. I shouted so loud but nobody could hear because the maids were in the kitchen. My parents weren’t home. I dashed upstairs to my bedroom, and on the way I slipped so badly. I was so painful. Blood came out of my head and I also got a big wound on my knee. They looked horrifying. Finally the rain stopped and someone heard me crying since there is no more sound of rain. She phoned my mom quickly. 30 minutes later my mom came back and took me to a hospital. The hospital smelled weird and I hated that smell. I wished I was at my house watching “ Tzom and Jerry”, but oh well crap happens. I could still remember the pain even 5 years later which is now. That was the crabbiest thing that happened to me in my entire life, and I hope something like that or worse won’t happen to me in the future.
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Anthony Lim
12/2/2014 09:32:33 pm
My childhood story
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Steven
12/6/2014 10:30:56 pm
My childhood story:
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Nay Win
12/8/2014 09:21:10 pm
When I was about 8 years old, we got a bedroom with 2 beds. There was a big gap between these squishy beds, and I love jumping from a bed to the other one.
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Thihan
12/8/2014 11:22:18 pm
The traffic is too heavy that day. Me and my mom were going to a special event in the school. When we arrived to school, there were so many cars parking outside the school although it was Sunday. My mom parked the car in the free sport and we want inside the school. A teacher called me, so I went to her. I went inside the classroom and the teacher told me to stay inside the classroom. I chatted with a person next to me. After a few minutes, the teacher came back and told us to line up, so we did. I took like half an hour to get to the stage. When I got to the stage, there are so many medals and trophies. A teacher give me a medal and a box and I had to go off the stage again. Me and my mother took some photos and we went back home.
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Thihan
12/15/2014 10:54:50 pm
*The traffic was too heavy that day.
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Sky
12/8/2014 11:56:08 pm
It was Saturday. I got up from my cozy bed and my mm came in yelling,” Why did you woke up so late?!?”
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Thuta
12/9/2014 12:09:24 am
“Thuta!” dad called. “Come down. I am back from work!” I didn’t really go down right away.
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