Check out their stories below!
The 7th graders have worked up creative writing stories responding to prompts about a giant kitten who takes over a city OR being lost in a cold, snowy wilderness...
Check out their stories below!
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Ms. Nina
1/29/2016 07:09:28 am
This is an example of a submission. :)
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Rosa Holguin
1/29/2016 01:55:32 pm
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Paula Torres
1/30/2016 01:34:52 pm
First of all I really like the tittle, you used lot of creativity. The fact that the cat reached 67ft tall, what a precise number!
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Amanda Contin
1/31/2016 04:53:13 pm
Great title and I really liked the descriptions.
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Amanda Contin
1/29/2016 03:10:51 pm
Lost, alone and trapped. These words are what my head repeated over and over again. Apart from being lost in an evergreen forest, ten thousand players and I were trapped in Sword Art Online. The game is pretty amazing, but the problem is that when your HP (hit points) reach zero you die in the videogame and in real life. If another person removes your Nerve Gear (a device that allows you to enter a virtual reality game), the device emits microwaves that make your brain explode. The only way of getting out alive is if you reach the 100th floor and defeat the boss.
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Ana Lopez
1/30/2016 10:27:14 am
I really like this story, the creativity and the connection you did. I really loved the fact that you put your personal interests like video games, into your story. I loved the introduction and the body, but the ending was a little bit weaker, as if you had squeezed two whole paragraphs into two sentences, without details. But over all it was really good.
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Paula Torres
1/30/2016 01:26:21 pm
I really enjoyed this story! I never thought of writing a story were I was in a videogame, great creativity there.
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Ana Lopez
1/30/2016 08:32:24 am
Sometime in history there were no cats on Earth, and sometime in history there was a war, between cats and humans, quite normal huh?
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Ana Lopez
1/30/2016 10:28:24 am
The title of this story is "The Furryous War"
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Paula Torres
1/30/2016 01:32:14 pm
I really like this story! Great descriptive writing, great creativity, in conclusion amazing story.
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Carola Prida
1/31/2016 04:10:32 pm
Great! Great! Check for comma splices! ;)
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Paula Torres
1/30/2016 01:14:11 pm
The Call of the Wild
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Paula Torres
1/30/2016 01:16:24 pm
Continuation:
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Paula Torres
1/30/2016 01:17:44 pm
Continuation 2:
Jose Ricardo Aponte
1/31/2016 07:50:40 am
Call of the wild
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Laura Jimenez
1/31/2016 07:53:57 am
"The Call from a Wild Neighborhood"
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Laura Jimenez
1/31/2016 07:57:35 am
Sorry the title is "A Call from the Wild Neighborhood"
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Amanda Contin
1/31/2016 04:52:24 pm
Amazing story! I liked the idea about a wild neighborhood.
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Mariana Reyes
1/31/2016 02:14:04 pm
"Alone in my Mind"
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Rosa
2/22/2016 05:23:10 pm
OMG! I really liked this story! IT was so different with the fact of the candy... Just be careful with spelling... The fact that you were eating the Statue of Liberty (you know, made of Hershey's) remembered me of the one you told me about...
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Julian Elias
1/31/2016 04:10:50 pm
Jan 27
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Julian Elias
1/31/2016 04:13:01 pm
The name is actually The Long Dark, Sorry
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Rosa
2/22/2016 05:13:38 pm
Great story! I really like the fact of telling the story somehow like a journal with the date and the hour... Just that be careful, if you're going to leave suspense at the end, be sure to use more descriptive writing and a well develop plot to make it happen, like, great...
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Jake Beesley
1/31/2016 04:38:48 pm
"Meow"said the fluffy golden cat.Jack was a nerd and so was his best friend Bob.When Bobs birthday arrived his parents bought him a mint condition chemistry kit.Jack and Bob instantly thought lets get mixing some liquids ,and see what happens.Eventually,they created an glowing iluminous colour.There eyes were stuck to it. They wonderd what would happen if they tried it?Bob had a lightbulb idea and spoke "let's try it on fluffy."
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Rodrigo Toca
1/31/2016 05:52:31 pm
Deep in gelid woods, where everything is dead or freezing cold, lies what now is my cave. Who would predict that my life at N.Y. as Director of one of the most popular companies in the world would change. Now I live in this cave at the frozen wasteland at Alaska. Now I am the last survivor of a plane crash. It all started about a week ago… I was to make connection with other companies on our system… It was Tom, Kyle Beesley and me. I already knew the drill we got into the plane to the airport at Montana. We spent 3 days talking about business. Then we head back to N. Y. on the 4th day. But this time it didn’t go that way… The pilot was a rookie who had just gotten his license and he was very distracted as well so we got on the plane when there were only 15 more minutes to get to Montana when suddenly the pilot fainted… We were flying around for who knows how many hours! We screamed like if there was no tomorrow! Kyle got control of the aircraft, but Tom was getting hysterical he repeatedly said that he couldn’t take more of this. I tried to calm him down for just a second but he wouldn’t. He even grew more nervous every minute until… He… threw himself … out of the plane! Kyle and I couldn’t believe it, he just opened the door and said “I won’t take more of this… I can’t … I just can’t take more of this torture” and he went out of the plane. We couldn’t see him fall, the blizzard was too dense.
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Rodrigo Toca
1/31/2016 05:55:09 pm
Title: Life at Alaska
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Jose Enrique Fernandez
1/31/2016 06:21:43 pm
Lone Wolf
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Jose Enrique Fernandez
1/31/2016 06:22:50 pm
I am not finished.
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Julo Garcia
2/4/2016 04:53:13 pm
In The Middle Of Nowhere
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Ana Gonzalez
2/12/2016 07:49:34 am
The Wild is Calling
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Rafael Llaneza
2/22/2016 06:09:00 pm
The call of the wild
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Felipe
2/24/2016 03:19:59 am
I could taste the salt in my mouth. Drop, drop, drop. Everything was quiet except for my tears. They kept falling down like rain from the skies. Boom, boom, boom, the cats stomped. "Dawn of The Cats!" people kept screaming. Everybody ran , and I was under my bed. I have to get out! I start moving slowly, step by step I get closer to the window. I poke 1 eye outside, and all I saw was people running and the giant fluffy cats. They look like giant clouds, because of their white fur.
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