I was heading to Alaska, in winter time, until something horrible happened. I asked the flight attendance what was going on, she said “It’s just turbulence, stay in your seat and nothing happens.” So I did as the flight attendance said. Few minutes later I heard the pilot saying that we were having some problems, I panicked and decided to go to the bathroom. While I was in the bathroom I felt a big and powerful crash. I got out of the bathroom and I saw that everyone was covered with snow and dead. The only one who survived was me.
Later on, I doubled checked the plane to see if I could find something in order to survive. I found a big survival kit with a lot of useful things in it. I also doubled checked the radio of the plane to ask for help, but there was no signal.
The first thing that passed through my mind was to make fire and a tent. The survival kit helped. All the nights, I slept next to the fire with a flashlight in case I need it.
Then I heard a sound, it was my mom’s voice saying “Hurry up, the plane is going to leave us!” Yeah, that’s right, I was daydreaming and I was heading to Alaska.
Amazing story Ada! I loved your vocabulary skills and your high-ranked words.
Something I Hardly
It is cold. cold like an ice cube in a glass of sweating water. The pieces of ice from the blizzard storm blast on my face. I can't see anything here in the woods with all the branches on my face and my lips as dry as leather. Where am I going? Why can’t I see anything? On my way all I can hear is AUUUUU! The cries of the wolves, blowing my ears out like a loud speaker.
Im getting tired of walking on this snowy, cold, icy floor, with my fur coat on and my dirty, ragged, messy old boots.And I just keep asking myself, am I all alone? Where’s the food? I took a deep breath. My stomach crumbled. I was hungry.
While I’m walking on the soft glowing snow I hear a CRACK! the sound of a small tree branch breaking, so I look back, but I see nothing. Maybe it’s just a tree who was weak and a branch fell out of it, or just a wolf passing by. While I walk all I can think of is ‘How did I get here?” “Why can't I remember anything?” “Who am I?” Somehow I forget about everything and just keep walking. Who cares who I am cause all I know is that since I got here I am the only person stuck on these dangerous woods.
I hear about a dozen wolves coming, so I get worried. Sweat comes down my forehead. What happens if they catch me? What if i never see my family or friends again?
I run and run not even thinking of looking back. My heart is pounding as fast as a horse about to win a race, but still there is no escape. I saw a small light, so I grab my knife and start to cut down everything in my path. Finally I get out of the snowy woods, but then I realize, I am surrounded by the mean, old, raging wolves. So I ask myself, “How am I going to get out of here?”
They are aggressive,saliva coming down their mouths aiming to catch their next meal. Slowly I grab my knife ready to do whatever I have to do to get out of this mess and survive. My mouth opens wide and my eyes pop, the knife slipping right through my fingers and my heart beat stops. There is a guy in front of me, protecting me from the vicious creatures who were trying to eat me! His eyes were beautiful, green like the grass on a sunny day and his hair was pitch black like the night. “Let’s go!” he screamed.
We run and run to the other end of the woods, and while we are running I realize that that noise from the tree branch was not a wolf or an old tree. It was him. After all that running we finally reach to his shelter where he tells me his name, which is Scott. Scott tells me the whole story of how I came here to get information for a project back at home for my job. He says I told him to come with me to keep me company during the trip. While we were doing our research I blacked out for no reason, so he got nervous and went to get some help. By the time he got there I was gone and since then he has spent all his time and dedication looking for me.
As soon as he finished it hit me. I remembered. I remembered the sunny blue sky, the fresh smell of flowers and him laying down his head on my lap, smiling at me. I remembered the tall buildings, the lights at night and a small sign that said, “Welcome to New York City.” All these beautiful and wonderful memories, but I couldn't feel a thing. And then I see something. I am shocked. I see an engagement ring. I take a deep breath, and then I realize he is my fiancé. The love of my life.
That is why I wanted him to come with me to this trip. Oh and that wasn't all, we were getting married in May, which was next month. I know what other people might think. Isn't that exciting?, I mean I’m getting married next month! WaW! The dress, the bridesmaids, the after party. It’s a woman’s greatest night, but there was a problem. I did not know the slightest thing about him.
Karla, great writing! We really liked the twist at the end and the vocabulary words. We also liked your metaphors and descriptions! Great job! -7A
Love it. It was really cool, i could picture myself in that situation. And the end was really funny.
Really good story, adjectives and details make it AMAZING
Your story was very good! I really liked the end when you said that you don't know the slightest thing about him.
Hi Karla! Very good story. Loved your story in all senses. You got really inspired! Congratulations!
“The Cat Who Saved Central City”
Jerry was a little grey cat who loved playing. He enjoyed every single day of his life, but there was only one thing Jerry was afraid of: rats. Every time he saw one, he cowardly went running out the door. Jerry’s owners didn’t like him, since he was a stray cat. They treated him with such disgrace, Jerry decided to leave the house. His owners didn’t even care; they didn’t do anything about it.
Jerry was wandering around the street as usual. He went looking for a place to eat. Luckily, he found a pet store called Martin’s Pet Care. Jerry thought that was the right place to go, so he entered the store.
Martin received Jerry with such care, so Jerry never wanted to leave. “Why do you treat me so well?” Jerry asked. “Nobody has ever done this before.”
“I love animals,” he assured, “and since you look in such bad condition, I will make you my top priority.”
While Martin went to the bathroom, Jerry had a look around the shop. He discovered an elevator. Since he was so curious, as cats usually are, he pushed the button, and the door opened. There were only three buttons: 1st floor, 3rd floor, and an empty button. Of course Jerry pushed the empty button. The elevator started to descend rapidly, and Jerry didn’t know what was to come.
The elevator shook so hard it made Jerry hit his head twice on the walls of the elevator. “Well that was nice!” he exclaimed. When he stepped out of the elevator he had to input a password to get in the room. He tried every single combination he could think of, but nothing happened. Jerry tried a random combination: “Here goes nothing,” he murmured. The doors opened! Jerry entered a giant laboratory. He inspected the laboratory and found a section of experiments. Rats.That is all he could see. There were like a dozen rats starring right at his soul. Jerry screamed: “AHHHHHHH! This lab must be Martin’s,” Jerry thought. “But what is he doing with all these rats in here?”
What he didn’t know is that the rats were injected with lots of mutagen, a injectable toxin can make things grow rapidly, and they would become the size of the Empire State Building in less than 1 hour.
He saw a bottle of green liquid with a label: M-U-T-A-G-E-N. Then he realized what was happening. “I got to stop this, quick!” he said. “But how?” he asked himself.
An hour passed. The rats started to grow instantly, and by the time Jerry noticed, they were lost deep into Central City. “Oh no!” Jerry screamed. The only way to beat the rats was if he drank some the mutagen, too.
Jerry drank some of the mutagen and became as big as the rats in under an hour. Jerry went out to the streets trying to look for the rats. They had destroyed everything in the city. Jerry had learned how to fight before his mother dumped him in the streets. The next day the rats showed up and Jerry was there at the right time to face them.
“What is the reason for all the chaos!?” Jerry asked angrily.
“This city will be ours!” the rats squeaked.
“I don’t think so,” Jerry said bravely. Then they started to fight.
Jerry beat them one by one, and the rats didn’t even have a chance. He was just too clever for them.
“Who are you?” screamed a civilian.
“My name is Giant Jerry,” he replied. Jerry had killed the rats, but he still had unfinished business with someone. Martin. He had no idea Jerry was this big and that Martin was in big trouble. Jerry found Martin in his local store, where Jerry was raised and taken good care of.
Martin asked nervously, “Jerry is that you?”
“Martin can’t you see what you have done?!” Jerry said. “Is this what you wanted?!”
“I didn’t know it was going to end like this!” Martin cried.
“I wanted the rats to clean the streets, but in an environmentally friendly way!” Jerry was so mad at Martin he didn’t know what to do.
Finally Jerry grabbed Martin by the waist and finally said heroically, “Martin Johnson, you have failed this city!” All of a sudden, CRACKK!! Jerry had snapped Martin’s neck and little Martin lay dead on the floor.
Giant Jerry was remembered as Central City’s most prized hero. He was congratulated by everyone, but then Jerry the cat was never seen again. He disappeared forever and never came back to Central City, but if he still lives, it’s a mystery and will always remain that way. However, there are rumors in Northern Russia of a giant grey cat that is sssaving the world from evil people.
“The Cat Who Saved Central City”
Jerry was a little grey cat who loved playing. He enjoyed every single day o
Guille, that was a great story! I loved the twist, that the cat is saving, instead of destroying, the city. I also really liked the sarcasm! Great work. -The 7A Class
It was one of the best I read, I really liked the part of the chemicals the little kitty drank...
This was one of the stories that made me laugh, I liked the sarcasm specially the part of the elevator.
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Guillee loved the story! I was very engaged to every single part, and specially the part of the elevator!! (the sarcasm part)
Lost in the Wild
I was outside, deep in the woods in a snowy winter. I was walking, I went far, far from home and as soon as I looked back I realized that I was lost. I was scared, frightened, and terrified. I didn't know what to do. I was at the top of a mountain freezing to death. I could tell it was the highest point and for sure the coldest. I was alone with nobody by my side except, ANIMALS! There were so many creatures surrounding me. There were wolves, a whole pack indeed. Some were white, others grey, and even black. All I thought about was death. I knew for sure I wasn't going to survive. The snow was as cold as ice and as white as a polar bear. All I could do was scream. I yelled and yelled but nothing happened, I was so pissed that I left my house alone. Since it was so cold, when I screamed I could even see my frozen breath. The thought of wolves was still in my mind and I was horrified. The wolves houled and cried, auuuuu!
Burrrrr! It started to get colder and colder, I shivered and trembled. It was so cold like ice cubes falling out of the sky. The next thing I knew was that there was a blizzard. I couldn't see anything, therefore there was a white out. Even though I couldn't observe anything I knew the wolves were still there because I could hear them. The good news was that I could hear them every time less, so I knew they were getting farther and farther from me. My heart was pounding very fast and I started to get anxious, so I ran in look of my home. I tried taking the same route that I did to come to this horrifying place, but it just took me to an even worst place. I spotted a polar bear so my heart pounded even more so without a doubt I ran to another place. I still couldn't find my way out of the woods so I kept on looking. I wasn't going to give up because then for sure I wasn't going to find my way out. I passed through the trees and I cutted all the branches that were in my way. I was trying to keep a positive attitude but it was very hard.
I was waiting to find hope and I did. I spotted a man. I went to him for help and my dream came true, he lead me to victory. I found my way throughout all this pain to the place I call home. I was so excited, it was a moment I will never forget. I really thought I would see my family, so I touched the knob, slightly turned it but nobody was there. My hope of excitement fell straight to the floor until I realized that my family was right behind me waiting for my return.
I loved the end. I thought the family was going to forget about her, but they were right behind her. Loved it.
I really liked your story. I loved the unexpected twist at the end and you included great vocabulary words.
Once upon a time there was a furry little kitten called Thomas, abandoned and lonely. He dreamed to be big one day. But his owner didn't, because he secretly would always want a little companion.
One day, he was tired of it, of it all. He sneaked out of his house at midnight to a radioactive matter conservatory, drank 3 boxes and by 6:00 a.m. he was already 127'3.
He went to a couple of places. Including: Ellen DeGeneres Show, a beach, and Jimmy Kimmel Live. He became world famous, instantly!
He began to feel bored, like if a switch just turned off all of a sudden. He needed to get back and look for help. His owner, Mr. Fluffybubbles, knew about what was happening and looked all around town. Funny thing was, all the time he just needed to look up.
Mr. Fluffybubbles said: "You better be down here right now you naughty cat!" "You're not my boss, you can't tell me what to do." Mr. Fluffybubbles called the police, but it was no use. With just one stomp on the ground he wiped them all off.
Mr. Fluffybbbles and Thomas have a story of not just being owner and cat, but of having a love-hate relationship. So Mr. Fluffybubbles said: "Thomas, i know we've been having trouble amongst us these past few months, but please shrink, I want my little kitten back."
So Thomas went to the doctor and got shrinked, making Mr. Fluffybubbles and Thomas best friends.
And they lived happily ever after...
I really liked your story, because it was were I most laughed.
Standing in the middle of a frozen wood, in a place so desolated that no one will ever find you. I have been lost in the freezing woods for a month now. I got used to the sound of wolves howling at night. I got used to the idea of surviving it was my only option. Here I am like a little speck hunted by everything that surrounds it. I am nothing more than any other leaving thing trying to survive the wild
I was trying to sleep but how could I when the wild is calling, waiting to hunt me. Soon the sun will show up, I was trying to keep the fire with flames to keep myself warm. I just wish that they could find me, but they can’t, not in the “barren northland. The sun started to show up, so I got up, ready to face the wild. As I walked I saw the wolves that were howling the night before. I could see the hunger in their eyes, and that’s when I knew I was just another snack for them. I took off running hoping I could escape the wolves. I was running for my life. Just when I thought I had lost them, a wolf grab me from the back. I knew it was my end, I knew the wild had hunted me.
“Ring Ring” my alarm went off. It was all a dream I was safe, I was at my warm home. I was alive. This might have been a dream, but I knew the wild is waiting to hunt the next person that is near it.
Loved the twist you made at the end.
I really liked the end were it says that it was all a dream. It was very good and you described everything very well.
I was In the remote area of Chernobyl just standing there seeing all the destroyed houses,factories.So cold,so cold I can feel the tension of the explosion that happened years ago I can hear the beast back in the wood the radioactive beast looking for some meat to survive. I started to look around and realize all storys i’ve heard are true the cold,the loneliness, the tension coming back from the woods that radioactive waste in the air all true. I walk around and saw skeletons of people and animals that died years ago either from the explosion or the radioactive air, the decomposed trees and plants. I feel the spirits coming to me building up inside me. Then the houses Oh those beautiful houses with no place to live in, no hope, no nothing. I started to feel nauseous , and had no air to breath no hope to live anymore the coldness just weaken me down those spirits pulling down to save them. I just felt my time was over
Survive or Die
“What happened to me?” I say to myself as I wake up in the freezing cold snow that was covered with blood. I put my hand on top of my forehead, which is also covered in red, thick, blood. I quickly stand up and look around. I can’t believe what my eyes are showing me. I see my siblings, parents and other strangers lying dead in the snow. I also see an airplane facing down broken in half. That’s when memories start to pop-out to my bleeding head.
It was my younger sister’s 10th birthday, and my mom decided to surprise her by going on a trip together with the whole family. I put my free hand on my mouth not crying, don’t know why, maybe because I was in shock and couldn’t believe what I saw. A tear came out, then another, and then another one, until I started crying like crazy. I could taste the salty yet cold tears as they went from my eyes to my cheeks and from my cheeks to my mouth. Tiredness ruled over me, and I quickly fell asleep.
I woke up in tears, still thinking about last night. I was so worried about everything that I didn’t realize how cold and hungry I was. As I headed towards the airplane to get supplies, I passed through a cloud of dead people who I couldn’t bear to look at. “It stinks in here,” I thought as I entered the airplane. Yes, the smell was horrible. More dead people were inside the airplane and because it was a closed place, that filthy air was flying around.
I took everything I could carry with me and headed to look for a safer place to be like a shelter. I founded a small cave which I guess I would have to stay in the meanwhile. As I went back to the airplane, I saw from a distance a familiar face sited on a rock with her hands on her face, clearly crying. I was going to go and hug that person, but I stopped myself. I didn’t know if my mind was playing tricks on me, or if that was really my little sister, Isabella.
As I walked slowly towards her, and accidently made one of those cartoon noises were the character steps on top of a branch. A “crack” noise was made, and as on cue Isabella, looked at me shocked, and came running towards me until something stopped her. It was a deep, cruel, howl of a wolf. “Don’t move,” I warned her. Other howls came along. It wasn’t long before a wolf came. It was there, a real life wolf was standing there, a few inches apart from us. I could see Isabella about to explode and start to panic. Her number one fear were wolfs, and to make things worse, the others of the pack came behind him.
I had read about wolfs. They always looked for the easiest prey. They slowly walked past us and practically devoured every single dead person. Wolfs also eat as much as they can whenever they find food since they don’t know they next time they will find more. After they finished eating what was left of the dead passengers, they looked at us again. “Now it’s our turn,” I scarily thought. I couldn’t let this happen. I couldn’t let my only family die too. It couldn’t end this way. I needed to make it clear who was the boss here.
I looked at the leader of the pack in the eyes, and took a step forward, to intimidate him. He growled to scare me but I didn’t even flinch. After all I was really scared, but I couldn’t show him. He looked away and walked back into the forest just as I had planned. We waited a couple of minutes until we could move again. We hugged and then we talked to each other about what had happened. Even though we had won I felt something weird still going on.
I looked behind me and I saw a grey wolf tale sticking out of my behind. Confused I looked at Isabella and she had become a wolf. I ran and ran until she catched me and started to attack me.
“Gabriel wake up!” She shouted at me. And that is when I realized it was just a nightmare and that none of this was real. “Huh?” I simply respond. “Don’t worry it’s just a dream. Now come on it’s my birthday, hurry!” I sigh in relieve and follow my ten year old little sister to the chitchen. I have never been more glad to see my family.
Sofia your story was really good, I loved it! But you have to check your spelling, and your use of subject-verb agreement.
The airplane crashed into the mountains. Every piece of me was frozen to the seat. Nobody knew what happened, but no one was there. There was so much snow on my feet, I was a living popsicle. I took a red lantern that was lit and took a look around and found a fleece jacket. With all my courage together I was able to walk away from the airplane and into the woods. As I was walking up the mountain and making crosses with a pocket knife that I found stuck on a dead tree.
Suddenly, as I was trying to run away from this pack of wolves, I saw a hurt mountain lion that started to chase me. I tried to pass unnoticed, the animal was covered with fur like a light chocolate, but he was not alone, there was a little pup she was taking care off. The wolves howled to indicate there was a dead animal near by.
The only thing you could hear was the pack fighting for the meat. I realized if they were to busy I would be able to reach the top of the mountain. It was so dark. I wanted to rest my eyes just for a second then as I opened them I saw this black smoke on the top of the mountain and there was this little torn cabin used for hiking.
With all my courage down the drain, I had to go back to the airplane but there was the chance there were wolves or mountain lions. I was reaching to the top and there was no smoke, it was an illusion my mind created to trick me.
I could not believe it was all a big fat lie. I went in the plane, just to get a fire started, but there in the door was a dead man blocking my way. The little strength I had I used it to take the body away. The moment I started the fire I felt warmth, which was something I missed from home. I remembered the way the packs hunted me all night.
The next morning, I saw there was a lake near by and I decided I needed to fish in order to eat there was nothing to fish expect this weird looking scaled fish in the corner of the lake I could not do it. The fish was not easy to hunt but on the other hand I never did this before.
I had to learn how to live along with wolf packs near by. The wolf pups were nice to me and so were the big ones.
I lasted 3 months running to get to a little town and found nothing. At the 5th month I realized no one missed or even noticed I was gone. The only problem is that in my dreams I could only think about the way my family was so close but no one missed me enough to search for me. That is when I came to know my fate belonged in the wild, in the woods, with myself.
Loved the descriptive writing
Sunny was lost, cold and desperate. All his years of training to get lost. HE was FRUSTRATED.
Sunny was a police dog. He searched drugs at a airport but he then became ascended to a militia dog. His hair was blonde and beautiful; he had a vanilla like smell. He had his tongue out all the time, as if he liked how air tasted.
Sunny was on his way, along with other golden retrievers, to Siberia. Although what they didn’t know was that the plane belonged to the Spetsnaz, a Russian elite task force that specialized at brute force. The Spetsnaz opened the plane and Sunny and all of his friends fell down from a 1km altitude. Sunny was lucky enough to jump on one of his friends and reverse the fall, falling barely alive and in terrible condition.
Sunny was lost in the remote snow of Siberia, alone and cold. Sunny was then surrounded by a pack of vicious gray wolves. The wolves showed tolerance to Sunny, he noticed that and took a chance to befriend the wolves. The wolves thought he was a god due to his gold hair and quickly accepted Sunny. He was then named the alpha of the pack, Sunny now ruled the largest Siberian wolf pack in history.
It is funny and interesting at the same time.
Hermes, creative story! I love the idea, but it could be even better if you developed this story further with more details. Good start!
While calling out for help, my heart was beating faster and faster, just because I knew I could die being stranded in this freezing forest full of decomposed creatures. Thinking of all the options I had, I basically had only three and they were the following: I could either die with no hope of surviving, I could start camping and have my own settlements with my own supplies, or I could become a furious animal looking for food, eating everything in it’s path. I better choose the second one. What happened? Asking myself every time I saw a skull thrown in the cold ice below my knees. I watched closely, they were no normal bones, they were infected, they could’ve been stricken by a plague or something.
Feeling the goosebumps in my skin, everything turned from bright to dark. Dying was my only fear, and I knew I couldn’t let that happen, so I thought of building a camp and start a fire. Lying in my only soft, weak bed, was the best. Memories came. We were in a trip to meet the other side of Greenland. Flying in the middle of snow and trees, the cockpit of the plane was the only thing I saw when we were about to crash down. “No!” said the pilot when he saw the plane had no fuel left. My heart stopped for just two minutes and I knew nothing. The sound of the wind, waking me up from memories, had told me another day had arrived.
When feeling the ice covering my face, the cloth I had on was everything I had to sense the heat in my body. When placing all supplies in the corner of the camp, I heard a loud roar which could’ve been from a furious gigantic wolf pack. I had to start a walk through the wood to try and find some more food and water. That noise was getting closer and closer, until I saw the shadow of an enormous wolf who was looking for his pray.
I started retreating slowly back to the camp and try not to start a situation. The last thing I wanted it to happen was to make eye-contact with the wolf, so I accidentally did… Walking turned into running, I heard the footsteps of the wolf in the snow getting closer every time. It could catch up, and it did. I fell to the snow and begun to defend myself from it’s attack, because this meant death. Trying to stay alive, I was searching for a weapon I could find to kill it. I felt something in my back, it was a tree trunk. While fighting and fighting, I took it and hit him as hard as I could, it was dead. Finally I won. I stood up for my life and destroyed my only fear. Death.
I liked your story because there was something always happening. Something always going on. It was never boring.
Really liked it, especially for the fight with the wolf and the tree trunk.
I liked the wolf part
As I buried my best friend under the snow, John, I suddenly realized it was getting dark and cold. John and I had had many encounters with near to death experiences, mostly with wolves. My fingers were trembling, I thought I would die alone in the freezing snow with no one to hold. Everything hopeless but something inside of me told me otherwise. My instincts told me to look for shelter. The only thing in my backpack left was a simple red first aid kit and a small orange tent. As I was making the tent, I suddenly got a terrible sadistic fear in my heart, I heard wolves howling. Ever since I got on that mountain I thought of wolves as devils sent from the bloody underworld filled with hatred, and with a sadistic murder inside of them. If only the heat wave apocalypses wouldn’t had happened. I knew that John had died because he ran away from them instead of facing them. I knew what I had to do. I rapidly grabbed a wooden stick with a sharp pointy end to use as a weapon. I carefully followed the howling, my legs were shaking unexpectedly a lot.
When I was at least 3 meters a far from the howling I was beginning to think it was more of a yipping. I still was very cautious until all my fear and shaking instantly disappeared in the cold wind as I noticed it wasn’t just a wolf it was a white and black male wolf pup with blue eyes with some kind of injury in his leg. I tried to get near him, unfortunately every time I tried he growled at me as if I was a threat to him. I lasted an hour trying to help him, fortunately I noticed he either fell asleep or passed out from the pain. However, I took that chance, grabbed him and got him to my tent. I got out my first aid kit out, grabbed some bandages and wrapped them over his wound, and took off a layer of my clothing for him to use as a bed.
At sunrise I woke up with the shining, mystical sun standing right in front of me. Even if I would have an awful night I would look at the sun and realize how great and magical life is. I always thought of the sun as a mystic object very secretive and beautiful. When I woke up I checked if the wolf pup was ok. He was laying beside me as if he knew I healed him. 5 minutes later he woke up, jumped on me and started to licking my face. For once in a long time I wasn’t feeling miserable, this pup was actually making me happy. He represented a ray of hope in my life. We had actually become friends. After a while I decided to name him. After a few hours of thinking I decided. It would be: “Cooler”. I decide to go take Cooler for a walk.
On our walk we saw from a far a pack of wolves. We quickly reacted and ran the trees and hid silently. After spending 2 hours hiding I took my head out of the tree to check if the wolves were still near or long gone. As I expected, they were gone. We cautiously resumed our walk and I realized we had nothing to eat. We walked to a nearby lake to look for food, basically fish. I grabbed a wooden stick from a tree to use as a fishing rod. After two hours of trying to catch fish with the stick I noticed Cooler had already caught 5 fish. He was a natural hunter. I packed us dinner and brought it to our shelter.
I'm not finished
Once upon a time there was a cat walking on the streets of New York and suddenly the cat saw a chemical falling towards his head. That chemical that was falling in the sky was being transported from the scientists of New York to the scientists of Washington so they could study it, but unforntunately for them the pilot pressed a wrong button and the back door of the plane opened and the chemical fell off the plane without no one to notice
Now back to the cat. He was panicking and while he was doing that the chemical landed on his head. The substance in the cats head smelled and felt very, but very bad. It was like he had booger on his head. The cat freaked out and started running in circles until he had nothing on his head. After he was reliefed that nothing happened to him, he said that it was enough for that day and decided to go to the bus stop so the Bus Driver would take him home. When the Bus Driver arrived to the stop, he and the cat had an argument.
Cat: Why cant you take me home.
Bus Driver: Because you are a cat not a person.
Cat: Is this some kind of cat racism!
Bus Driver: Sorry little cat but you cant get in.
Bus Driver: Bye, and never come to me again!
After that argument with the Bus Driver the cat felt like he was having the worst day of his life. And now to even make it worst while the cat was walking in his way home something unexpected happened. The cat began to grow and grow until it reached the size of the Empire State building. The cat panicked and started running in circles but this time he was huge. Every step he made sounded like an earthquake. When he stopped running it was when he noticed he had destroyed five buildings. He didnt felt bad for what had happened to him and decided to keep destroying the city.
Ones the military became aware that a giant cat was destroying the city they sent over 1000 soldiers to stop the big cat, who they named Catzilla. It was tough fighting against Catzilla, but at the end the cat lost the battle and was given an antidocte to reduce his size. They also gave him some pills so he could fall asleep and take him to a special place. When the cat opened his eyes he saw himself at jail, with over 100 more cats surrounding him shouting:
meow, meow, meow, meow!
Maybe I Have a Chance
It’s a dark, snowy, and lonely night. I’m lost in the woods, and no one could hear or see me.
Two days before, I was on my way to Hawaii, when suddenly the plane red light turned on, and the flight attendant says that there is no gasoline left and not to panic, while stumbling through her words.
The plane started to shake like an earthquake and then trembles through the snowy trees of a cold place, but I didn’t know what state it was, then the shaking stops. I stood up with the help of my arms, while my muscles were tumbling. I looked over a sign that said ‘Welcome to Alaska’.
I was wearing a t-shirt and a short. Then I knew I was gonna freeze to death. I didn’t knew what to do except to go into the airplane and look for food/cloth. I saw all of the dead bodies with a smell of decomposing corpse. I opened some carry on and took some jackets. I looked for food, but the only thing I found was an apple. And I thought “Well that’s my dinner for tonight”.
The next morning I woke up and the first thing that I did was to look for food, but there’s none. In the snow there’s neither trees full of fruits nor grapes on branches. I had to find my way to survive, and the only thing that came to my mind was making a fire, burning up the bodies, and then eat them, so I did. It tasted like eating raw food with juice on top that it was blood.
I build myself a shelter yesterday, but it wasn’t good. It fell, because of the blizzard that passed last night. I took 2 emergency doors and a chair of the airplane to build my little house. I sat down and looked at the sky. Suddenly I heard a person mumbling, so I look down and a passenger’s arm started moving.
I liked the story and the ending, since it was a cliff-hanger. Check you subject-verb agreement and your perfect!! I was a little bit too violent with the cannibalism and all, but it was really good.
Very good story! I really liked it and you should make a second part to tell us more about what happened after the arm started shaking. The part of the bodies made me have goosebumps ew.
Catzilla was a giant cat who was bored in his house with his owners. catzilla lived in Chicago. His owners left him in the house background because he didn’t fit in the house, he ate 1000 rats a day, he was white with green eyes. He went out of the house to the city, his owners were looking for him all places in the house. He was in the center of the city of Chicago. Almost everybody that was in the city at that time were crying and most of theme were scared. Two minutes later catzilla went on top of one of the highest buildings in the city.
When those two minutes passed, catzilla went mad, he almost explodes a building with about 900-1500 people in there. Since he hit the building badly the building started to get in fire on the top of it. Catzilla screamed MIAUU, there was a completely silence in the city, it felt like all the city was calmed. Catzilla went crazy and destroyed the central building, it was crazy!
When catzilla destroyed the central building, police mans came to kill him. When catzilla saw the gun, he went crazy and went back home, catzilla was even on Tv. About three hours later they found catzilla alone in the street crying, people came and when catzilla saw them he wanted to kill them people didn’t know why. His owners were searching for him all places in the city because they had saw him already on television which was really impressing for them that their cat was on top of one of the highest building in Chicago, the owners of catzilla never found him again! It was really impressing and very sad also for the family, catzilla went with other owners, it was really disappointing for that family because they loved catzilla and also catzilla cost them too much money because he was giant. The other owner also did’t treat him as good as the real owner. Catzilla one day bump his feet with the floor because he was mad probably because he didn’t found his other owners and he wantsd to come back to his old house that had a very big background specially made for him because of his size also when that happened a very bad smell came, it smelled like if the floor broke up and bad smell came out of it, the bigger the floor was the bigger the smell was, also that gave me a signal that catzilla was near my house. When catzilla bumped his foot in the floor I felt a shake on my body like if the earth was shaking, the bad thing was that it was my mom trying to wake me up shaking me because I had to go to Tennis classes. When I finally wake ump I screamed NOOOO, my dream has been gone! After that time until now I’d never for get about the cat called catzilla.
The Bad Comedy
February 25 year 2069 it was the year the new tropical island, it was kind of expected so that isn’t the plot. 6 years after I was sleeping but thinking of this so the plot is that Russia separated the country with Americans and Russians use this island for experiment with the recent exo suit invention it was a boom. My next invention will change the military world. Ohhhhhhh yeah! I haven’t said my name yet I’m Adam I work as an inventor in the military. “ What is this?! This isn’t anything compared to the San Francisco base,” “who’s there,” I said. He entered the room he was a new person Jake Sullivan the most feared commander in California. “Hey how are you sir?” I said.
“I’m Jake Jr.”
“What? I was scared! You are the son of Jake Sullivan!” I shouted.
Well we were friends the same day I finished my creation the gloves that turn into exo suits. I got it for my self. We were home I turned the TV on and Jake saw them I thought it was the movie channel but it was the news it took me an hour to find out. Jake was trying on the suit, I took it of him I saw it was a giant cat it was a mutant. Jake put on the medic or explosion type, which was the only one I made. The cat chased cars, but it was shot and he ran away from the city to the factory. At that point he was strong enough but he destroyed the factory he got even bigger.
And I said “ what a catastrophe! Ba-dum-pshh”
“Just get to it already. Give me the suit,” he said.
You here him reader I just want to kill him but he’s my comrade sooo I cant. But I know someone who can I walked over to the cat told him “kill Jake” he was gonna kill me and Jake saved me. He exploded the cat’s face and everyone was happy except for everyone that died. The next day there was a man he called himself savage he was mean he made me cry so I killed him I think. The day after that I faded off this world every thing was white. Only thing I remember is realizing not killing him.
Part 2 JAKE Jr.
“Adam, Adam, Adam! Don’t die Adam!” I said
“I thought it wasn’t a love story,” those were Adams last words. Well after that he was jailed. It was hard enough to think without Adam after all he was the only one who accepted me as a friend. After dining alone in a restaurant I took an alley there was a guy he was called Rick, Rick was a lot like Adam. He was a genius but he was serious. Rick was a marksman he could shoot down that cat thing with 1 bullet. Another thing was happening it was another cat or a lion it was nothing because Rick could kill it easily. He said, “I had a rough childhood.” He told me that he lived here because he was kicked off the house. Rick was an member of the sword family he couldn’t use guns but he was a great man with them he has no emotion he didn’t have any trust.
When I saw the news Adam was in the hospital alive. I was crying but when I visited him he didn’t have any emotion he couldn’t trust me any more his heart was a metal part his trust was different he just said when he saw me “I hate you leaving me alone for all this time didn’t check my pulse after a while you are a cold person and now I know not to trust anyone you are not a friend you are now an enemy. A new day Adam was causing chaos he joined the Russians and controlling other experiments like a giant lion or a giant gator a giant wolf and an giant ape. Even though he couldn’t make them all do specific things it was nothing little but Rick could just deal with them he had backup but I talked to him.
“Adam you shouldn’t do this!” I shouted with all the explosions on the back
“Well you should just shut up!” He just interrupted what else I wanted to say.
“Why?” I just asked him “you are trusting the Russians.”
“I’ll kill you this time!”
I was so scared I couldn’t move. I saw his eyes and remembered how he could laugh I was about to die and I was scared of my severed bonds with my dad being scary he was my first friend I couldn’t shoot him. I got my knife and hurt my self so I could move I could barely take cover. Rick saw me I shouted, “I’ll do it I need to.”
You could see his tears he both shot our legs. We were both crying, staring to each other. The giant cat killed him. I couldn’t bear the pain not the shot but the sudden loss of a friend. I tried to inherit his bad comedic jokes it didn’t go well.
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