Rewrite your stories with my edits, and post them here. Be sure to read other stories, as there was some excellent writing for this assignment!
The assignment was to write a story about a memorable event from your childhood as if you were still a child (just like Bruno in "The Boy in the Striped Pyjamas"). The purpose is for you to understand the link between perspective and tone in literature, as well as to practice your awesome writing skills.
Rewrite your stories with my edits, and post them here. Be sure to read other stories, as there was some excellent writing for this assignment!
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Jane
11/29/2014 10:31:11 am
My childhood memory
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CHu chu
11/29/2014 11:58:06 am
NGA PALI
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Eddy
11/29/2014 07:45:09 pm
My Childhood Memories
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Oscar
11/29/2014 10:14:15 pm
Today, when I was climbing down the stairs, a dangerous thing happened. I want go to my uncle's room. So I ate my food and slowly walked to the stairs. The stairs still scare me. I started walking down. When I was halfway there, I saw my uncle checking his study work. So I shouted at my uncle and he smiled at me. I was so scared that I might fall down. So i walked down carefully. It took a lot of time. Then my cousin came out of nowhere and started looking at me walking down the stairs slowly. He couldn't control himself. So he came close to me and started touching my whole face. I really hated it. I told him to stop playing with my cute face, but he didn't listen. He started whispering and he pushed me. U couldn't control myself either. I fell all the way down. I was lucky that my uncle fetched me. He started yelling at my cousin. He asked my cousin why he pushed me. He said that I was so cute and he wanted to push me so badly. My uncle was speechless. But I am still mad at my evil cousin for what he did.
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My Childhood Memory
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Haythi
11/30/2014 08:45:09 pm
Childhood Memory
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